The mouse was in the trash looking for dinner when he heard a door slam. Rico came out of the trash and entered the building by sliding under the crack in the door. As he went in he saw people that looked like they were cooking food, saw fire and heard yelling. He didn't want to get caught, the only thing he wanted to do was to get dinner and leave. He ran under the table, slid across the floor and landed in a bowl. The chef picked the bowl and started to pour cake mix into it and realized that Rico was in it. Taylor threw the bowl and tried to kill Rico with a broom. The mouse was running like a cheetah trying to catch his Pray. He ran by the chef in a blink of an eye. He saw a piece of raw bacon that had fallen on the floor, picked it up and kept running. The chef slipped on the ground from where the cake mix had fallen. Rico managed to slip out the door and was relived that he wasn't killed.
Heather, you need to proofread your work before posting it. "Trying to catch his PREY." " He saw a piece of bacon that had FALLEN." "...where the cake mix had FALLEN." Little things like that cost you points.....
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